社会热点话题(Essay II):

㈠文 章 结 构 模 式：

Paragraph I: (1)引出要评论的事物或观点(general);

(2)提出问题(specific)。

Paragraph II: (1)作者对该现象或问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;

(2)支持性的细节分论点;

(3)本段总结(可以省略)。

Paragraph III: (1)总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。

Example:

My View on Fake Commodities

Like most people, I welcome the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society.

Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation’s economy. At the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people’s health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers and the free market in general.

In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things

㈡适 用 句 型：

首段引出话题：

1. Nowadays, …… has become a problem we have to face.

如今……已经成为我们必须面对的问题。

2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem …….

现在越来越多的人开始关注……的问题。

3. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of …… has drawn/aroused/captured worldwide attention.

最近……现在的日益增多已经引起了全世界的注意。

4. Recently, the issue/problem/question of …… has been brought into focus/

/brought to public attention/posed among public attention.

最近……问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。

5. In recently years, many cities/nations/people have been faced/troubled with the serious problem of …….

在最近几年里，很多城市/国家/人已经面临……问题/受到……的干扰。

6.Nowadays more and more people come to realize/be aware of the importance of …….

越来越多的人开始意识到……的重要性。

7. It is undeniable/There is no denying the fact that …… has become the utmost concern among people nowadays.

不可否认，……已经成为人们最关注的问题。

第二段细节论证：(分析原因)：

convincing given

1、Among the most reasons cited by people for…, one

important offered

identified

stressed

should be emphasized ……

mentioned

在人们所提出的对……最重要/有说服力的原因当中，有一点值得强调……。

regard sign of……

see trend result of……

2、One may view the increase as a response to……

think of phenomenon reaction to……

这个趋势/增长/现象应当被看成是……的一种象征/结果。

increase

change mainly results from

3、The failure in… largely /

success partly arises from

due to the fact that…

is owing to

attributable to several factors

……的增长/改变/失败/成功的主要/部分原因是这样的……。

4、We may blame …for…, but the causes for the problem

criticize roots phenomenon

go far deeper.

我们应当在……方面批评……，但这个问题的产生是有更深层次的原因的。

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